Review (10) - Harder Than You Know - Insanity

Title: Harder Than You Know
Author: Insanity
Genie Reviewer: JennyIsAineseKiaile

Story Title: 5/5

 

I liked the title. The title caught my attention and I felt like wanting to know what the story actually is about ‘Harder than you know’ this title give you too much thoughts of how the story is going to start and be.

Appearance (Does it look eye catching): 6/10

 

There are no posters or anything about the characters in the foreword. In the foreword I think it’s good to write the characters description in the foreword. You said ‘It’s an OC/Jonghyun’ story but I think it is better describing them in the foreword as well.

 

JongHyun (22)            Suwon (22)
Best Friend of Suwon      Best Friend of jong Hyun        

Likes ______             Likes Jong Hyun

 

Like you know those kind of description? Maybe it’s more better to write those, to know more about the other shinee members and the other OC as well!^^;

Forewords/Introduction: 9/10

 

The foreword and the description are really good that I liked it so much. It tells you how the rating is and that there will be what kinds of scenes in the story and telling the peoples that that it is your own made story. It’s really quite good you tell bit about the story in the description and the foreword which makes me as a ‘reader’ want to read the first chapter already wanting to know what is going to happen.

Plot: 19/20

 

I read all the chapters that you’ve been updated… Eventho the story is still ongoing I loved the way you started the story with a ‘dream’. I like the way where you introduce the characters one by one. As I read chapter by chapter the story gets more interesting. By continue reading your story I get more into Suwon and Jong Hyun in the story. The plot is really good.  

Characterization:  8/10

 

Since I don’t know how many OC characters that you are going to have, I don’t know about the characterization of those OCs at the moment! But you characterization of the main characters are good enough! The Suwon’s character is like so good that sometimes when I read your story I kept on imagining Suwon with your story which is real good enough for me to get into that character. Eventho your story is in Suwon’s point of view you described Jonghyun and Onew and the OC characters who came out of the story pretty well that I really liked it.

Creativity/Originality: 5/5

 

You already wrote in the foreword saying this is your own plot/story. I find this plot interesting and this is my first time reading a story like this and this good! So, yeah! Keep up your good imagination and your good work!

Spelling/Vocabulary/Grammar/Punctuations: 10/10

 

You didn’t have that much problems with the punctuations or anything like that. I think there weren’t really a mistake. Eventho you had mistakes it wasn’t that eye-catching easy ones that I can point out to you. Everything was just fine.

Flow (Does it all go together): 10/10

 

Your flow of the story is very good. You didn’t rush you just straightly got into the story (continued it perfectly), and kept on describing the characters and everything like you did on the other chapters that you wrote. Your flow is great that if you just keep on going like this, it won’t matter.

Writing Style: 13/15

 

I like your font and the size of it. I like the writing of yours because I really like neat and clear writing where you can read it easily and understand more. I really don’t have a problem with it. The paragraphs that you did were fine and everything else was fine. I liked how you used the italics to the words but I didn’t really like the way you put a line across the words ‘Unfortunately, he wasn’t Jonghyun.’ The italics was good but the line wasn’t that good to me.

Overall Enjoyment: 5/5

 

I enjoyed your story that I will keep on reading it till you finish! Keep on updating! Goodluck with your story!

Total: 90/100